I think you painted the picture of farm life pretty well. For some reason, (probably due to the title and the tags) my first fear was that Grandma had been blown away and then I thought, well if she was Dorothy (Oz) then maybe that wouldn’t be such a bad thing.
My only criticism is that in the last paragraph, due to the blanket sentence mostly, I couldn’t tell who was wheezing and who said Grandma (though it can only be Colleen in retrospect). Presumably you ran up against the Ficly limit?
Jim Stitzel
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Robert Quick
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