Slice of life but I’m not sure of what.. I do empathise with Jake a little though; almost anything can be construed as racist nowadays. So hard to create characters that dont deliberately conform to OR avoid the obvious stereotypes. Couple of typos though, “excess folds at her waist” and “Good luck with your story, bro”.
Slice of life but I’m not sure of what.. I do empathise with Jake a little though; almost anything can be construed as racist nowadays. So hard to create characters that dont deliberately conform to OR avoid the obvious stereotypes. Couple of typos though, “excess folds at her waist” and “Good luck with your story, bro”.
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