Intense visuals and quite a dream. Lots of grammar stuff to clean up, from run on sentences to word choice (such as a ‘the’ where there should be a ‘that’). Has promise. Just needs some cleaning up.
Intense visuals and quite a dream. Lots of grammar stuff to clean up, from run on sentences to word choice (such as a ‘the’ where there should be a ‘that’).
Has promise. Just needs some cleaning up.
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