Fun scenario, and I like the way it ends. Can easily picture the both of them. That first paragraph is a bit bumpy. Did you mean to say, “…sight of her own reflection…” And the last sentence is hard to follow (maybe just a punctuation thing) in the middle, “…looked confident and dangerous safe inside…” Other than those things a very amusing and fun read.
Thanks for reading. I fixed one sentence and left the other one alone. It is a bit long but I’m not sure that putting a comma or dash there is correct.
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Robert Quick