I like how this was written. it’s almost like, you have to keep up and read carefully to what you’re saying – not that it’s confusing but because of how you transition the sentences into completely new ideas even though the result will always be three birds. I actually enjoy this quite a bit.
I like this because even though it seems absurd it is completely relate-able. I can’t recall how many times my words have been misinterpreted for absurd reasons. And then this makes me think that is that the meaning behind this ficlet? It is thought provoking , and I think that people can read a lot out of this. Or maybe read nothing. Maybe they will simply just see this as a statement of three birds.
Feels like madness. Also feels like the madness to which one is driven by doubting and second-guessing clods. That sort of ramped up, edgy feeling comes across well.
Infinity.
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