Comments on (Day 27) Hiding Amongst the Furniture by Michael Wayne LeBlanc

Robert Quick

Interesting. Over all this one has great tone and flow. The only word that sticks out is myopic. To me that doesn’t feel true to the character but I could be wrong.
- Posted almost 7 years ago.
Princess Binky Lemontwist (LoA)

Huh, I thought it was a man narrating at first.
I belive there is a slight typo in the paragrah with the clip-clop. You put a second “was”.
- Posted almost 7 years ago.
Michael Wayne LeBlanc

Thank you, Princess Binky.
- Posted almost 7 years ago.
JACK

I imagined a ghost ,“unused yet dusted
Room”. Or yet a pair of mischievous imps.
I must get into this story.
- Posted almost 7 years ago.
- 4 out of 5
JACK

I imagined a ghost ,“unused yet dusted
Room”. Or yet a pair of mischievous imps.
I must get into this story.
- Posted almost 7 years ago.
- 4 out of 5
JACK

Did you miss day 26?
- Posted almost 7 years ago.
- 4 out of 5
Michael Wayne LeBlanc

http://ficly.com/stories/34212

No, I just reserved that ‘branch’ for new leaves. So far I’m just writing the scenes that come to me; there hasn’t been much cohesion between ficly’s.
- Posted almost 7 years ago.