now for a poem mushy and out of character

so So SO awesome.
Sometimes this is honestly how I think too and it’s not always easy saying how you feel or explaining how you mean!
I liked the inner confusion a bit and this character wanting to tell the person how he feels. I really liked the line “I think what I want to tell you is I’m not afraid of being rejected I’m just afraid of succeeding”
also really like how honest this guy is being in his letter saying she’s not very beautiful but it’s like it doesn’t matter to him. He has feelings for her for other reasons than that.

haha. sorry. I keep goin on and on now!
anyways! really great job. Enjoyed this immensely

That was hilarious. I think we’ve all been there too. Probably killed your chances with the “you’re not beautiful” line, but it was heartfelt. Fun read.

Agree with Infinity. Love the back and forth. Nice to see that someone else’s brain works like mine. Really liked reading this.

Thanks everyone for the kind comments! I’m surprised to have won this challenge: I felt the other entries were very good as well.

Wow, so awesome. You perfectly described what it feels like to not know what the hec you’re doing when you’re trying to express feelings for someone. Very good!

Wow, so awesome. You perfectly described what it feels like to not know what the hec you’re doing when you’re trying to express feelings for someone. Very good!

Thanks! I guess that when it comes to the eventual moment when I’d be put in the same scenario, I wouldn’t know what to do either. I guess what I’d think would be something like this, I suppose’