yeah, something definitely had to drop, and you took this quite literally, making for a metaphoric moment. Not a bad little moment captured here, and perhaps with spaces between different sections, this would flow a little better.
P.S. thanks for the hug!

Great story, and no doubt my own mum would describe it as very life like :)

@ElshaHawk-I definatly felt spaces were needed between paragraphs, but there was no more room left! haha And I did have a space at the end I believe but it didnt show up :(

and no problem for the hug! no such thing as too many :)

@i, Coomber- thanks so much!

yeah space restrictions can mess with the flow. :)

I love how you used a car roof instead of a house roof

thanks! :)

hehehe that was a cute story

oh yeah and scrawl how would she have gotten the candy on the house roof and then drove the house to school?

Joe used the right word – cute. Darkly cute, if that’s possible. Brought a smile to my face.

Ah, forgot the pencils.

Hahaha Thanks guys!!! Sorry I’m so slow responding. I have been crazy busy. :(

@Scott: Darkly cute is definatly possible!

@Mighty-Joe Young- That comment made me laugh out loud. But not in the corney lol way. In the I-honestly-laughed-out-loud-in-a-coffee-house-full-of-strangers-who-are-now-starring kind of way.