That is really nice. I mean I like how you structured this and how you broke this up. I really like the line “I’m terrified and it’s verified by my shaking hands”
I wonder what you meant in the first part when you typed ’You’re coming home Soon. Thinking of You fills me, thrills me, kills me too." But I like that small air of mystery for me.
I like how you’ve captured this moment. It’s just like any other day. Washing dishes, normal routine, but somehow the realization of how deep love has taken hold pops up and scares the narrator. I’ve experienced that moment of revelation before and the way you structured this really sets the pace well.
Infinity. 
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