I like this a lot. It got just a bit wobbly towards the last 8 lines. I am sure you can rewrite history . Well done

Lovely. I loved that early line about ‘picnic songs and hippie bongs’. Really set the mood and cadence for the whole thing.

A very interesting mix of the carefree (picnics, bongs, travel,hot-spot etc.) and some darker themes. Perhaps the cliffs will wake our hearts indeed – I was just thinking along those lines a few minutes ago.

Just reading some of your new works, still as incredible as ever Ab :) <3