Cute version of death and the afterlife. Easy to picture this character floating above his coffin and musing over his options. The first bit seems a little like a run-on or two, or maybe there’s just a different way to break up the various bits? I’m not sure there.

I like how you opened up the afterlife into a world of options and choices. You also kept the subject very light and humorous which I think can be hard to do well. :)