Oi. A scary ficly that raises a hundred questions!
Very dark and menacing. It doesn’t seem like there’s much hope for the guy. Effective voice and narration here.
I really like how you describe what he’s feeling and his actions, it was really descriptive and pulled me in from the start. Great attention getter for sure! What the heck happened to him? Such mysteries..!
Princess Binky Lemontwist (LoA)
THX 0477
Infinity.