Interesting beginning, the set up had its good moments and its bad ones. I mean, you showed us in the first paragraph, created a picture of dad, then you ‘told’ us about his rehab in the end instead of showing us.
The dialogue is quick and youthful, but it leads up to your foreshadowing plot point, “Or could I?”
I hope there is a sequel, and I hope to to be shown, not told, some more about this son’s plans.

Thanks. I definitely will write a sequel. The feedback was helpful. Now that I reread it, I see it was choppy and i need to “show” you. I’m on alot so expect it soon.

-Keep It Real