this reminded me of bhutan and the joking “let’s pray to the god of wifi” & “quick throw some iphones into the furnace as offerings” etc etc

but i love the 1. bestest still v appropriate linebreaks and things and just lovely

Nice trio. Even if I can’t entirely make sense of them, it flows well and challenges me to think a bit.

@pyrhhic

i could have made an allusion to that, didn’t think of it until now. but i already wrote a poem with that last year. repetition breeds stagnancy.

thanks for your comments on 1, I liked it much more than 2 and 3 as well, although I thought the last bit was clever

@thx0477
thanks. it’s also a bit of the way I write poetry because I seldom manage to describe a singular, clear-cut idea. I like the kind of poetry with multiple, numbered, not-necessarily-linked stanzas. I wonder what they’re called, if anything.