I love that you have made the old man with such dry humor! You’ve also beautifully executed the description to dialogue ratio. :P I hope you continue this series because A) I want to know how the world is supposed to end here, and B) I want to know how they will save it.

Oh ho, but who says we’re saving the world? The old man might get his way after all, if I cannot get the gumption to finish it.