Well that was dark. Great expansion of scene and then retightening. That worked really well. Great entry into the challenge.

What THX0477 said. Very dark, but it definitely worked. Despair has found a voice. Wow!

Thanks you guys! First time writing anything, really, aside from essays and whatever.

Well that escalated quickly. This is a fine entry into the challenge. The humorous title almost seems out of place when compared to the events that unfold. I enjoy the multiple meanings of “Ride to Nowhere” that exist within the confines of your story.

Love the description in this… great use of irony. :)