I think moss is a stretch.. lol

Elsha, this is absolutely beautiful! Words cannot convey how truly spectacular this poem is! WOW! I absolutely loved it! It should be published!

thanks unicorns, i was going for a rich landscape, a garden, for a poet to come from.. lol, it kind of reminds me of Cabbage Patch Kids.. hee hee.

I really like it. You’ve got a good hand for altering rhythms just slightly and it still sounding great. Your imagery and synaesthesia between sight, sound and scent. I actually didn’t mind the “moss” reference, but “There inside” did cause me a bit of a stumble in the beat. Really loved it overall though. :) Thanks for posting another great one!

hmm, i guess the “there” could be dropped without losing anything. Great point!