I like it, a nicely done job of making it unclear if the person is literally in space or just metaphorically, though I’m leaning towards the latter. Great entry in the challenge.

It’s nice to see poetry in answer to a challenge. I enjoyed this. I loved some of the descriptives, and for some reason reading it made me a little sad. Nice job!
God bless…

It’s nice to see poetry in answer to a challenge. I enjoyed this. I loved some of the descriptives, and for some reason reading it made me a little sad. Nice job!
God bless…