Typo at the start, with It instead of In. Also the whole sentence is repetitive of what we just ‘watched’ in the previous installment. You could get the same point across with a statement or two or thought processon the part of Eva.
This one definitely needd paragraph breaks. By convention you should start a new paragraph each time a different person adds a bit of dialogue. Also, it makes it easier to follow who is speaking and the flow of the conversation.
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