A cute, albeit rushed ending. A few inconsistencies—grieving camp the next day when it was previously described as a weekly activity, and that they went to camp at all despite it being cancelled for the rest of the year. Feels rushed and like a lot of exposition. Some of the stuff could come across in dialogue or could simply go unsaid.
It’s a cute scenario and a good story overall, just needs some technical polish in the telling.
THX 0477