Intriguing premise, if I followed it correctly. You packed a lot in there, so a great deal was left unsaid. The character limit is the culprit, but it did wind up feeling crunched and a little hard to follow.

Thanks for taking the time to read and comment. You are so right about it feeling crunched and being a bit hard to follow because of that. Usually my shortest pieces run to 500 words, give or take a hundred. I had to cut over 500 characters to make this work when what I really wanted to do was to add more. I’m glad you found the premise intriguing. That makes me happy. God bless and thanks again. Have a wonderful weekend.

your mentioning of the moon, of Guardians, and of being unseen, make me think this is at least inspired by, or may in fact be set in the universe of, the ROTG movie.
Knowledge of what is true and what isn’t is a cool power! It just seems kind of random, though, given what happened? I’m curious why you chose it.

Hello J.Rein B,

First, thank you very much for taking the time to read and to comment on this for me. I really appreciate it. As for your questions… I suppose this character was a little influenced by the Guardian movie, but just a little. This character may become part of my Guardian Series novel in progress that I’ve been working on, on and off for two or three years, if not longer. The reason he was given the power was because he acted out of vengeance and without having all the facts and because of this, innocents died. He is being offered a chance for redemption, provided he does what he is supposed to do. The power is tied to his offense, so to speak. He has to make amends, and he has to do it with limited contact with others. I’m not sure if that makes sense. There’s a lot that’s left out due to the character count so I’m not surprised that you have questions. Reading back on it, there are lots of holes, LOL. I will work on filling them in later, but that will definitely up the word count.

God bless and thank you again for reading and for your interest. :)