Of course, well written. So compelling I would love to backtrack through your prequels, but time is not on my side today. The only reason I wont yet grant 5 stars is because I don’t know the history…is that fair?

Do what you will. I hold comments closer than I hold the ratings, which I find to be more or less meaningless. Don’t get me wrong, I appreciate any 5’s I get but almost no one explains what they mean when they award a rating and if it is lower than 5, they don’t explain what could be improved. It’s one of the reasons I don’t give ratings any more except under very specific circumstances.

Thank you for reading and commenting! It’s too late to let you know that this Ficly has exactly one prequel but I hope you enjoy it when you have time.

I wish that were a little more background. Why are they attacking each other?

Dodgeball Captain says: I choose Nina.