It’s not as funny in English, since most of the sayings have been – ha ha – lost in translation, but I did my best to do it word by word. :)

I’d forgotten how much I enjoyed the use of italics as inside thoughts.. mmm, it’s like remembering ice cream again. Missed you!
I do see where the jokes are lost, however, you have a great family dynamic working here. :)

Nice. The bits that have slipped away in the translation don’t seem to ruin the piece as a whole.

I really like it.

I agree with dkscully. It might not be as good (I had the same problem… :P) but it still works!