thinking about ‘the multitude of sticky fingers and careless restocking’ and ‘the familiar friends with predictable responses’ make me smile about my library experiences – I agree, a really nice tribute!
The flow felt a little choppy, but not bad, and I really liked the overall message. I liked the line about ‘sticky hands’ too—created a nice visual of eager kids tugging books off shelves to explore them.
I liked the message as well – the last line really makes this piece – though I feel the alliteration is at times jarring (perhaps you could add some assonance instead, to enrich the work).
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