The pace is steadily panicky while the atmosphere shifts with the sights and sounds blending together into quite an experience. Intense. Like an off-beat adrenaline rush… if that makes any sense :P Nice one.
The pace and the blankness of her thoughts convey the animalistic protagonist well. The scene is perfect, dark, passing by quickly. The music and the open door and the men are great. I picture them Italian men at a restaurant, but that’s just Lady and The Tramp intervening, and she isn’t even a dog.. :)
Tad Winslow
ElshaHawk (LoA)