Well, that was a stream of consciousness. Not bad or anything, but it is what it is.

Thank you for you entry. I love that I can sense a natural bit restraint creeping in at some parts, and then go away again. It’s absolutely wonderful to see. It’s a very “human” bit of writing that I found most enjoyable to read. Thank you so much for writing in the spirit of the exercise, I really appreciate it. Furthermore, the thoughts and images in this are interesting to imagine and to think about.

@ THX 0477: I have to wonder what the purpose of your comment is.

Someone once wrote that if you haven’t got something nice to say, perhaps it is best not to say it at all. I would add the observation that your comment does not contribute in any way to this challenge and to the bit of writing which was kindly shared here for all of us to read.

For what it’s worth, I find it resentful.

I don’t think THX meant it as an insult. I think he was just saying it as a neutral point of view.

No worries and thank you.