This is… fantastic!
It’s a kind of science fiction, isn’t it?
It was filled with a sense of suspense. In the meantime, I think it tried to convey something tragic behind the plot. A girl, doomed to “protect” human beings, under a cruel policy or something forcing her to do so. It’s a difficult job, and also a cruel fortune.
Thanks for sharing.

I was picturing starfish…
But in the end you were much more gruesome. Disintegration.

I read this one yesterday, but didn’t commment right away. However, it kept coming back to mind. It reminds me of the surprise ending of “Ender’s Game” to some extent…the horror of realizing that what you did has harmed others— It’s grand.

Very bizarre. Sounds almost delusional, or at the very least a Twilight Zone episode. Nicely written for suspense and tension.

Amusing. In a way that makes me sympathize for the frustrated individual. I wonder how much stress someone would have to go through in a test like that.

Salva short for salvation?

Yes.