Wonderful! I like the description of the river cutting through a grove of trees and the golden sunlight dying everything. And I approve of the message your ficly delivers. Thank you.

My only negative point is that I had no idea they were moving. When the ground drops off beneath them it was like the earth opened up a chasm beneath them. You make a good point, however. You have to sometimes get in an awkward position, i.e. falling down a hill, to see the beauty around you.