Ah, a poem of sweet ‘nothings’ is so beautiful. – This is the challenge winner in my book (so far). I find myself reading it over and over again and each time I get absolutely ‘nothing’ from it. I love it!
It’s concisely stated, this poem is. There’s a light rhythm and it’s saying something (about nothing). The language devices you use are nicely balanced.
I’ll be deciding sooooooon. Good luck, all. And thanks for submitting before the deadline, remembrancer :)