Managed Nirvana two times in one day. Am exultant. That wouldn’t even have meant anything to me a few days ago. I think I’m getting seriously addicted to this site…

I like it, but I think you need to change this sentence:

“When I asked about those injuries you kept having you told me you fell off your bike.”

Ficly is addicting. I haven’t written anything for a little while, but I constantly think about things to post on this site.

Ended up taking it out (because probably, given the kind of power level she’s implied to have in the other story, she’d be invulnerable) and replaced it with something else I wanted to put in but couldn’t fit.

Nice twist. Not easy to be a superhero’s boyfriend, and I should know…

You may want to re-word the first paragraph to make it a little smoother. Great idea for a story though! I dig that it’s a man writing to a woman.

I love the departure from the POV of the superhero herself and into the lover. Funny.