(Corrected)

I like the privacy of this but “we know” is an odd addition.

“Your final fate as you well know”?

If the “we” is intentional, then great job.

Candy crush saga is a black hole of frustration.

The ‘we’ is entirely intentional.

Ha, Candy Crush is quite the inspiration lately. I love the symmetry of the poem. It looks and reads very appropriate to the theme. Well done!