When I ran across the love letter challenge I couldn’t resist linking my response to the story I wrote for the breakup letter challenge: http://ficly.com/stories/3551 Lumina is, of course, that story’s Emily. I love supervillains who refer to themselves bombastically in third person. The world doesn’t have nearly enough of them anymore.

hahaha…I’m very much enthralled by your comment Garsecg…this is a good piece of writing, no doubt in my mind at all, but your quote about the world not having enough third-person-referring super-villians, well, that’s a beauty!

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The fact that he introduces himself at the beginning and signs off the same way at the end is brilliant.

Hilarious letter.

Heads up – there’s a stray “I” here:

“I glimpsed you my heart I was consumed”

Fellflame is one of the better supervillain names I’ve heard recently. And Charnel-World? Ugh. This guy sounds seriously unhinged. I wonder if he’ll send flowers?

Those super-villains with their extraneous exclamation points and egregious lack of commas… I’m very disappointed. Someone ought to write a letter to the Super-villain Institute.

And I have by doubts about him loving her “most tenderly.” But she’s a grown woman…it’s her decision.

I quite enjoyed this, if you couldn’t tell.