Awesome. Each stanza begins with an action of speed. Excepting the last stanza, which ends with the action ‘to run’. I have to say, I enjoy reading your poetry. It’s fresh and modern without being overly eccentric.
Just keep going. Quickly. Lest your past catches up with you. Apparently that would be bad. :) Watch out for things in front of you, though. The faster you go, the faster they come.
BiC
ElshaHawk (LoA)
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