I get it, but why would the program isolate him? It just seems like a cruel fate here..

How interesting. I’ve read this a few times now but I’m not sure I understand the ending. However, I found the images in the first part were easy for me to capture and make sense of even though they were brief which I found quite impressive. I also enjoyed the switch from a disjointed flow of images to a more stream of consciousness use of language. It was easy to tell the two apart and not just because of the italics.

Seems familiar. Is this a repost? I’m not a huge fan of the programming code as prose, but I get the idea.

Yes, Doc, it’s a repost. However, this is supposed to be ‘programming code’ as poetry, not prose. When I wrote it I felt as Homer may have felt penning his Odyssey! I thought it to be inspiring, epic even. Nevertheless, ‘tis a failure. (oh well, if at first you don’t succeed… :)

Not sure quite what to make of it, but:

Shaggy dog;
>wet
>ruffled
>motionless
>>unaltered

I think, could stand on its own.