It reminded me of that ‘Locked Up Abroad’ television show. I like the voice or tone used here. It fits her melancholic looking back at mistakes made. I also like that the story ending suggests much more adventure.

It reminded me of that ‘Locked Up Abroad’ television show. I like the voice or tone used here. It fits her melancholic looking back at mistakes made. I also like that the story ending suggests much more adventure.

I like. I think we’ve really got something here! This could be the beginning of a great series. I hope we get a sequel so we can find out. Well done, well done.

Thanks to THX for helping me with a sentence. His contribution:

One day they left her plate a bit too far from her cell.

@ Mr. Bic, get to it, the sequel is all yours. Come out and play with me.

If she can escape, this is one great character to play with and have an awesome adventure.