Haha, wow! This is excellent, and I’m impresssed that you managed to (somewhat) seamlessly use the song titles in the piece. Nice job!

This is a lot of fun. I did notice you’ve got “your” in the place of “you’re” a couple times. When in doubt, see if you can fit “you are” there and if you can, use the contraction.

Great idea, and pulled off beautifully.

This piece is supposed to be part of the Tribute challenge, using song lyrics in tribute to music artists/band, etc. Somehow it does not show up there..:( Not something I would write, but it was a fun challenge at 2 a.m.

it just flows.. crazy Paddy. I have no idea where you ran into difficulties at.

This is fun writing. Great job.