I have a soft spot a mile wide for supernatural romance, so I enjoyed this a great deal. Excellent story.

I like this story the last line really does it for me. So much encapsulated in so short a piece begs for more.

I love this take on the challenge. I think your premise did come through very well and of course it struck a chord with a nerd like me—I also sometimes feel like the worlds I’m reading about are more real than the one I’m living in, and feel sad about living in such a boring one. Then again, I do believe our own world has its own kind of magic and the best fantasy and SF helps us see that magic.

I should have said that it was “a fantastic take on the challenge in every sense of the word.” Oh well…

I want to know how the world was destroyed, now. :)

The confusion and the relationship of the lovers is captured well.

Maybe it’s the character’s confusion passing over – but it leaves me a little confused about what’s happened and what’s going on.

It’s a great capture of that one moment in time, though.

The two characters are being played by “mundanes”, and found out that theirs isn’t a “real” world…that’s how it was destroyed.

So, when faced with the idea that everything they know being created by a “normal” person for entertainment, they chose death.