There’s ‘something’ about this piece that I really like. Oh, I remember – the ending. Then again – it’s really ‘nothing’, so I guess there’s ‘nothing’ I like about this. (I think ‘something’ is confusing me :)

I like the hope, the tree reference, the belief in someone being something. It’s a great sequel.

You really put a 180 on what those sayings mean. Good read.

Transcendent, and hopeful. I like the way the lines disperse at the end, with the extra spacing, like something fluttering away.

The beginning seemed almost sing song to me. Cajoling rather than demanding a response but those last lines felt like slaps to the face that left no room for any sort of argument.

I also enjoyed the reference to the tree and forest that others have already commented on. Beautiful imagery.

It seems very lyrical, very poetic… Love it!