Life passing before his eyes? We always remember the painful, or emotional moments more vividly than the calm ones.

That is, you used a lot of great moments in his life. Nicely done.

Would titling this ‘Unwinding’ would have been too much? I like this piece, like I like country music. It helps me ‘unwind’. (Com’on you knew someone would ‘go there’.)

This has an Oliver Twist feel to it.

Very sad. Nicely done, and I like the subtle British elements, if I read those right. It took me a bit to catch on, as I am exceptionally thick today, but once I got it…POW!…potent stuff.