How creepy! I wasn’t expecting a haunting when I first started reading. I figured there would be some sort of murder but the lapses in time really added to the feeling of a dream or nightmare.

Very odd evening he had. Trying to decide who was the ghost, or if they both were.

Hey, I recognize this one. It’s the old trick that makes us ask you to tell the story again. She’s looking for Pete, cause he and RePete were in a boat and Pete fell over. Who’s left? Come’on people, don’t keep falling for it! :)

A bit disjointed, though that feels like a concerted effort to be so. I have no idea what happened, but I don’t think I need to. Interesting scenario and character.

“With the superpower to womanize ghosts.”

Thanks, all, for your interesting comments.

Well, I was a bit confused at first. After I read it a couple times, it made more sense. So intriguing.