I told my daughter about this site today and wanted to write a ficlet, so I let her on my account, and here is whats he wrote.

and she wanted to write a ficlet*

Good story. :) The present tense threw me off at first, but it adds to the dreamlike quality. Something is invading her life through her dreams/subconscious and leaving a mark on her body. I like it.

Opening your eyes to blackness is a strange feeling. You aren’t sure if they are open or not. Sort of like when you don’t know if you are dreaming or not. Joey, please let your daughter know, I thinks she done good.

Definitely gets the dream-like feeling across. Welcome to ficly!

Thank you guys for the positive feedback, I will show her these comments tomorrow as she’s asleep right now. Hopefully she’ll continue to write more, I love her imagination.

What we do when we have no consequences shows who we are. Sometimes it’s visible. Sometimes it isn’t. I liked it :)