I see, the bold and non-spacing is your ‘style’. In that case, I like it. I think your tag is misleading though. The story is really good. :)

You have a way of dropping ’s’es, probably typing too fast, as I did in the comment on your last story.. oops. (face should be faces)
Here is a moment in time where the person has a choice.. to grow up and stop irresponsibly drinking, or to ignore the negative feelings and recklessly seek out the fleeting surges of high.

Elsha thank you for the comment. I agree with my excessive dropping of s’s, and that this is about someone who has the chance to stop their current lifestyle. Thank you for the critique,