Based on a true story?

Awesome! So.. this is what he was doing during that ‘hellish’ week. Cool. Thanks for giving us all some background. Sounds very ‘Vegas-y’.

Bits of the story spill out without punctuation. Is that a deliberate choice? A sort of “stream of consciousness” sort of thing? If so, I think it works with the story. His dream took me by surprise, and I liked it a lot.

@awayken, yes, he’s wasted. Great question.

So, he’s not scouting for the company very well.. girls complicate things when they have pills.

Bizarre. So, he didn’t make it to the conference? Very strange in terms of the flow of the story, but it’s well written to convey the heady and intoxicating effects of alcohol, pills, and lust.

Stylish and clever. I love the surreal violence of the pinata image; echoes of A Clockwork Orange.