Dark, very cold and dark poem. Lots of death and sorrow and torture.

I can’t put my finger on it, but this piece seems to have a brief, evil, eloquence about it. Perhaps the sequel would be titled: Grandiloquence?

Not sure about the evil eloquence of it, but it certainly does leave one feeling unassuaged. One of the more interesting things that I have read on this site so far.

Sorry I commented ignorantly. I have no idea what ‘breviloquence’ means – the word nor this poem. I like it though.

Breviloquence means short/concise, from Brevity.

Turmoil and tragedy are two words that would be applicable tags, but the main focus for me was fitting all the information in a short format while maintaining the structure.

I’m not sure if this carried, but the last stanza is meant to display a cessation of vision, disclosing the previous portions to be a foresight of sorts. (more of past history projected into the future as a logical progression).