Whose eye is it?
This form of bifurcation I can get behind. What is he looking for? What is in the building?
So many questions and so much confusion.. not enough answers. :) Sequel.

Seems the story was written to match the title only. But the story is great.

Well that was bizarre. Tantalizing though in its possibilities. I liked the addition, as if it were no big deal, of the same gender spouse. Felt appropriately tense.