Very fun! I love how you kept with the style of the first part, yet really added to the story!

‘At least the McElroy’s dog is no longer a problem.’ Awesome line! Great sequel.

That is adorable and awesome. Great job with the continuation of style as boxofun said. Roy wound up a bit rougher around the edges than I’d imagined him, but that’s fair and perhaps even allowable given the stress of the situation. Really nailed the relationship between them and the wife’s loving disapproval though. Thanks for the sequel and very well done.

Agreed, great sequel. The gap in time between this and the first part was a little jarring, but I really liked the tempo from there and how it maintains the tone and theme.