Well, that’s a crappy day if ever I heard of one. Nicely and darkly told with lots of icky feelings and visuals to put us right in with your beleaguered protagonist.

It reminded me of something . . . That line there is what gives this story a ‘Slender Man’ sort of feel. Is it just a guy puking all over his self or is there more? Mystery is enticing.

So a few months back I wrote a sequel to this, I’m sorry I deleted it. I’ll go for it again. I like this ficly that much.

It’s quite visceral and horrid: nausea and bile indeed. I love the girl’s numbed reaction at the start – a realistically mundane understatement. A good read!