Can’t help but feel your (plural) writing is better than mine, but I felt this was needed.

Thanks, Stockholm! This game is fun with two, but three is even better. Nicely written, as well.

This seems to pretty firmly establish everything else as flashback, bar your contributions. Suits me, although now I need to figure out how to get Shaw down there…

Yes. Thanks for the sequel, Stock. This gives our story some purpose, a direction to go in. These contributions of dreams or flashbacks, will really help. I think Shaw is dreaming though, since it’s obvious that Akmal is the true scion!

Hmm – perhaps you’re right. Confusing, when you’re making it up as you go along, isn’t it?

Bizarre. I have no idea what’s going on, but it’s beautiful and just enough detail to keep me grounded enough to appreciate the moment even if I’m in the dark as to the overall situation.

This is fantastic. Great descriptive imagery, seamlessly blending ancient and futuristic styles.