Comments on Airships: The Walls Hiding Our Souls by Princess Binky Lemontwist (LoA)

HSAR

Brace yourselves.
- Posted over 6 years ago.
- 5 out of 5
Princess Binky Lemontwist (LoA)

#110

It starts here if you want to catch up: http://ficly.com/stories/31023
- Posted over 6 years ago.
HSAR

Sequel is proving harder to write than I thought.
- Posted over 6 years ago.
- 5 out of 5
HSAR

By the way, special mention for the line:
“He looked at her eyes full of worry and care and he could imagine them turning to icy hate.”

Which is almost exactly the image I thought Hawkeye was thinking of, myself!
- Posted over 6 years ago.
- 5 out of 5
Princess Binky Lemontwist (LoA)

Oh that’s pretty awesome! XD
- Posted over 6 years ago.
THX 0477

Lovely moment, and I like the tension before the sweetness at the end. That second sentence feels a bit long. Nice to have this moment of emotional connection in the midst of the epic war and intrigue tale going on.
- Posted over 6 years ago.
Princess Binky Lemontwist (LoA)

Yeah I’ll fix that. Thanks. :)
- Posted over 6 years ago.