Seems very simple but at the same time complex. The third paragraph felt like some fragments, but maybe you meant it that way? I dunno. Really great descriptions. I especially liked the hedgerows rustling and chirping with hidden life as I often notice that when I go walking. Funny how a mood comes through in the midst of all the scenery.

You have consistently beautiful writing. I especially enjoyed the “Doppler-warped” line.

How kind – thank you.

The descriptions in this are stunning. I especially like “embedded in distance.” I almost want to think it’s a child, but then the writing seems to suggest someone older. Beautiful snippet that seems to mean so much more.

Loved the description in this. Written a sequel just to see how the description here can work towards a narrative..may be going off at a tangent.